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Dark Poetry #1

Windows of Light

Wet
Member

since 1999-07-25

Posts 60
Brentwood, Tn

0 posted 1999-10-07 09:13 PM

The love of the night
Releasing stress and problems
from the makers elves.
His workers linger in their
Shelters until the break of the night.
No more shall they suffer.
No more shall they cry in the night air
Ending comes to a brief mix of light and darkness.
The lamp becomes visible.
But now longing for once that it always had...
Deprived to be transparent to the light of the beholder
Yet now shunned by...
And not called upon...
But now realizing to the existince,
That the light from my lamp
No longer shines through a transparent window,
But an opaque, bleak prison.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 1999-10-07 10:02 PM

Wonderful imagery here. I have always felt like I view life through "tinted paynes", like every ones in on the joke but me....sorry, got carried away, I can assure you your light is vivid and shining. Hope to see more from you here in the Dark Forum.

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Michael Anderson

When God puts a tear in your eye,
He puts a rainbow in your heart.

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

2 posted 1999-10-08 08:43 AM

Welcome !!
I like this alot...
No longer shines through a transparent
window....excellent. Hope to read more!!

Jenny

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