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suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

0 posted 1999-10-07 05:15 PM


bleached bone
scattered flesh
fellings stone
quite rush

He appears
takes me away
He appears
With him I stay

death quick
life end
hate stick
pain depend

He appears
takes me away
He appears
with him I stay

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life is short kill quick

© Copyright 1999 Tom - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-10-08 08:40 AM


Love the "bleached bone"!
Keep pouring those emotions out!!!

Blessings,
Jenny

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
2 posted 1999-10-08 11:43 AM


Nice work...left images in my head.

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Michael Anderson

When God puts a tear in your eye,
He puts a rainbow in your heart.



suicidal dreams
Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
3 posted 1999-10-08 07:39 PM


Thx and dont worry my emotions pour in all my poetry

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life is short kill quick

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