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suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

0 posted 1999-10-07 05:12 PM


I have puked out the last of my shattered heart
It spilled out in shades of red and green
My dreams, my hopes, my prayers unfulfilled
But I can hope things still turn out
How long can I wait, wait till death appears
Will I accept him when he shows
No I must live to make things right
Must to make friends happy
Death always seemed ideal, but now I have great friends
Me though I am tired of friends
I need love
And im unsure if love exists for me

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life is short kill quick

© Copyright 1999 Tom - All Rights Reserved
Dragoness
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since 1999-08-07
Posts 513

1 posted 1999-10-07 07:27 PM


You need to live for you...you can't make people happy they have to find happiness themselves.You can only be there to lead an ear and your support.Thats a true friend. Good Poem!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.


suicidal dreams
Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
2 posted 1999-10-07 09:07 PM


Right now im the one who needs support from me killing all or myself, is basically what i meant I need to be protected from myself

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life is short kill quick

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
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3 posted 1999-10-07 09:58 PM


I never found love until i stopped looking for it. I believe it is out there for all.
Very good poem though, expresses the "aloneness" we all feel at times. Well done.

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Michael Anderson

When God puts a tear in your eye,
He puts a rainbow in your heart.



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