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Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

0 posted 1999-10-06 03:33 AM


You didn't think it could happen
Did you?
You never thought you'd sink as low as me
You had your head up so damn high
You didn't notice the hole in front of you
The deep pit of misery I've dug for myself
And you fell in with me
Now you just deny it
And put clouds in front of your eyes
You think you can claw your way out.....
But it can't be done
I've tried
The claustrophobic despair
Eats away
Until there is nothing left inside
Then, my friend
You will know the helpless fury it is
To be me

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

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DreamEvil
Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-10-06 04:21 AM


Rocks well my friend. The spite is palpable.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
2 posted 1999-10-06 10:25 AM


Being in the mood that I am in at the moment....I would love to send your words to another!
As Always your words make me think...

Jennifer

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 1999-10-06 02:28 PM


Though I'm sure my old counselors would tell me this is projected anger or something like that...Man, it makes for one hell of a poem!!
EXCELLENT piece, my friend. Truly FELT this one.

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Michael Anderson

When God puts a tear in your eye,
He puts a rainbow in your heart.



suicidal dreams
Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
4 posted 1999-10-07 09:25 PM


hahahaha boy i always feel your pain every time.oh well now your pain accumulate unto mine, mutilation seems divine, will this pain leave in time?

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life is short kill quick

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