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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
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0 posted 1999-10-05 03:28 AM


Stone cold eyes, with avid Darkness, glitter.
Calm facade hides this maniacal mind.
The taste of achieved dreams becomes bitter.
This day the random factors have aligned.

Calm facade hides this maniacal mind.
Inflicted pain becomes exigent need.
This day the random factors have aligned.
Sacrificed reason plants an evil seed.

Inflicted pain becomes exigent need.
The lust for life is such hollow madness.
Sacrificed reason plants an evil seed.
Carrion dreams are feeding this sadness.

The lust for life is such hollow madness.
This nightmare rides me while I am awake.
Carrion dreams are feeding this sadness.
My untamed Beast only bloodshed will slake.

This nightmare rides me while I am awake.
Life has become that which I thought it should.
My untamed Beast only bloodshed will slake.
I spit in the face of the common good.

Life has become that which I thought it should.
The taste of achieved dreams becomes bitter.
I spit in the face of the common good.
Stone cold eyes, with avid Darkness, glitter.


©1999 DreamEvil

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


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Christopher
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since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration
1 posted 1999-10-05 05:02 AM


Ok, first i thought
"Calm facade hides this maniacal mind."
Was a bitchin line...
then you pulled out
"Inflicted pain becomes exigent need."
and then you pulled off
"The lust for life is such hollow madness."
It was then I realized that this was an awesome collection of words my friend, powerful and striking through to the darkness of my soul!

Dragoness
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since 1999-08-07
Posts 513

2 posted 1999-10-05 09:26 AM


Well done brother....well done.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.


JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 1999-10-05 12:10 PM


Ahhh Dream
another madness to share!!!
Me likes!!!



Jenny

[This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 10-08-1999).]

Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
4 posted 1999-10-05 03:01 PM


Wow.......beautiful poem
I liked it a lot

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

BoyToy
Junior Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 23
everett, wa, usa
5 posted 1999-10-07 10:05 PM


Truely Righteous!

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A dark, black past is my most valued possession...D. Mustaine

Michael
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
6 posted 1999-10-07 10:13 PM


Ditto Chris's expression...you delved deep into the Channel of Dark Thought with this one, my friend. Wonderfully done.

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Michael Anderson

When God puts a tear in your eye,
He puts a rainbow in your heart.



Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
7 posted 1999-10-08 02:04 AM


You shared a gift, the showing of the darkness in all of us. I have darkness too, but if only I could put it into rationale, I'd then maybe, dare to post something here.
I'm envious.. great job.

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How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool?
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



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