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Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

0 posted 1999-10-04 01:40 AM


Sporadic happiness
Yesterday's kind
Self-induced misery
Tortured
Excell at failure
My own worst enemy
Aspirations gone
Trusting of no one
Infinite hate
Corrosion of morals

Deaf to all hope
Emotional destruction
Collapse of sanity
Avoiding the truth
Youth of America


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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
1 posted 1999-10-04 03:17 AM


Indeed, Sys.
Very well done.

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Michael Anderson

The coldest lies are often told in silence.



DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

2 posted 1999-10-04 03:19 AM


Well done indeed, my friend.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 1999-10-04 09:53 AM


Sys I really like this one.
It is a really good form.
I am not very good at this type of writing!!

Jenny

Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
4 posted 1999-10-04 01:40 PM


Thanks for the replies....I wasn't too sure about this one.....

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

suicidal dreams
Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
5 posted 1999-10-04 07:14 PM


Man your good at this. I still say your way better than me! good luck on your next posts.

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life is short kill quick

Dragoness
Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513

6 posted 1999-10-05 09:12 AM


Nicely done....although so sad.No one excels at failure,it just seems that way.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.


JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
7 posted 1999-10-07 01:54 AM


Did you catch the acrostic in Tragic Twilight? I thought for sure you would...

Jenny

suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
8 posted 1999-10-07 09:27 PM


Dragoness what do you mean no one excels at failure obviously youve never met me!

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life is short kill quick

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