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Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana

0 posted 1999-10-04 12:11 PM


A deep discomfort rising within
Memories rushing over me,
like a quick-flowing river
Reminding me of a secret
told only to myself
It was the rape of an innocent mind,
as he circled me like a predator
Against the wall, as he stood over me
His body was so close,
too close,
to mine
I knew that I should tell
but my lips never found the words
Besides,
he didn't do much except
make me dread the moments awake

© Copyright 1999 Morgana - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-10-04 10:20 AM


I LOVE IT !!!!
From the first line to the last!!


Jenny

Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
2 posted 1999-11-05 01:54 PM


A deep discomfort rises over me and I feel the need to apologize for the male gender for any pain caused you by whomever this was. I know it doesn't mean much to you, but I, for one am truly and deeply sorry. This subject breaks my heart every time I cross it.

DE, thank you for sharing this.

Sincerely,
DB

Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-11-05 09:32 PM


Nicley done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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