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Dark Poetry #1

Immature

Olga
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

0 posted 1999-10-02 11:30 PM

You say I'm immature.
And that I'm just a kid.
You say that I'm a little girl,
And theres nowhere I could fit.
You lied to me, and said you care.
Now you're saying "Let me be,
You don't belong in here with me".

You said "I'm way to old for you.
What will peolpe say?"
I told you age is just a number.
Yet i realize no matter what I'll do, you will always act this way.

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"You cannot sedate all the things you hate."

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

1 posted 1999-10-02 11:56 PM

Olga,
Very good verses here.
I have felt this way in my past.

JENNY

Dragoness
Senior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 513

2 posted 1999-10-03 12:49 PM

To som people apperances are everything,even at the expense of their own happiness.Nicely done.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Olga
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

3 posted 1999-10-03 10:14 PM

Thanx, but see this guy's problem isn't my appearance, it the fact that im a couple of yrs younger than him, and he doesnt want to be with a "little girl" cuz he's so worried about what others will say.

[This message has been edited by Michael (edited 10-03-1999).]

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