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Temptress
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0 posted 10-02-1999 10:22 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Temptress

Mourning sky
Turning black,
Filling with the smoke,
Of flesh.
Such a wasteful existance,
We live to serve
And soon I'll revolt,
Catching the sign
Of dying times,
Choking,
And pulling tight
The knot of deliverance,
As life is free,
To roam in other worlds.
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Umm...I couldn't make sense of this, but had to get rid of it anyway.
© Copyright 1999 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-02-1999 10:29 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

I take from it, a soul crying over the waste
of humanity...I wouldn't say you had to get rid of it...you've just merely passed it on for more of us to explore....


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2 posted 10-24-2002 11:46 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Sounds like revolt against the self to me.
 
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