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Michael
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
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0 posted 1999-10-02 07:42 PM


PIECE BY PIECE

Death in sections, the curse I bear.
The affliction of one tormented soul.
Reflections of a past, unanswered prayer
To take me once, to take me whole.
With shaking hands and half-blind eyes
Squinting at the scribbles on this page.
With fleeting hope I realize
I've but just begun to feel your rage.

Death in sections, as destiny decrees,
You are the piper, I numbly chase the tones.
Through the toothless rictus of disease,
With cold, dead skin clinging to living bones.
While the jagged blade of mortality
Twists it's way into my lung.
How can I help but question one's morality
With the taste of blood still fresh upon my tongue?

Death in sections, bliss in agony,
My albatross, my talisman.
"Touch me not" I once begged of thee,
Now I call to you but half a man.
Mentality, itself, ailing in your scope,
Ambiguity from ambition, shame from pride.
Guilt from passion, despair from hope,
The fragments of emotional genocide.

The song of silence, the shadow of darkness,
The price we pay for what we crave.
That insatiable touch of emptiness,
As the vital organs each, one by one, waive.
I no longer worry of dying alone,
Or where I may lay after the fall.
I no longer worry of sins or how I may atone,
But that I may ever die at all.

I no longer care to justify the pain of life,
The pain of death is becoming too great.
I no longer care that I'll never know the love of a wife,
Misery has at least been a true mate.
I feel there's nothing inside me left worth giving,
Ah, the true arcanum of this piece by piece death.
To love, to hope, to wish to go on living,
I would surely summon my last gasping breath.


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Michael Anderson

I could not love except where Death
Was mingling his with Beauty's breath -
Or Hymen, Time, and Destiny
Were stalking between her and me.
EAP




© Copyright 1999 Michael Anderson - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-10-02 09:00 PM


Complexity seems your theme lately. That trend likes me much, as does this piece my friend.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
2 posted 1999-10-02 10:06 PM


Complexity is just one description...may I
say...I find this one enchanting and an talisman all unto it's self !!!!
Jenny

Dragoness
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since 1999-08-07
Posts 513

3 posted 1999-10-03 01:13 AM


Very powerful! Loved it!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.


Michael
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
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4 posted 1999-10-03 04:01 AM


Well, thank you Dream and Jenny,
I guess my life is complex of late. Hope it was still understandible. And thank you Dragoness, glad you found it enjoyable.

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Michael Anderson

I could not love except where Death
Was mingling his with Beauty's breath -
Or Hymen, Time, and Destiny
Were stalking between her and me.
EAP




JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
5 posted 1999-10-04 12:06 PM


This one deserves a few more eyes to look upon it!!

Jenny

Deep Blue Me
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since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
6 posted 1999-11-16 09:56 AM


That insatiable touch of emptiness...

I'm in perpetual awe.

DB

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The little girl on the plane, who turned her doll's head around to look at me...
------Franny & Zooey------
===J.D. Salinger===

FreeByrd
Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267

7 posted 1999-11-16 01:19 PM


Schismatical for sure

-RS

[This message has been edited by FreeByrd (edited 11-16-1999).]

FreeByrd
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since 1999-11-03
Posts 267

8 posted 1999-11-16 01:25 PM


Maximum Obscure Passions

-RS

[This message has been edited by FreeByrd (edited 11-16-1999).]

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