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Lucie
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077
Houston

0 posted 1999-09-30 01:38 AM


Chilling winds blow through my soul.
Shadows smother my ray of light.
The demons follow me around.
Lurking there just out of sight.

Shadows smother my ray of light.
Dreams of unpleasant memories.
Lurking there just out of sight.
Flowing through pen to poetry.

Dreams of unpleasant memories.
Things that frighten the child inside.
Flowing through pen to poetry.
In this nightmare there’s no place to hide.

Things that frighten the child inside.
Visions of hands reaching out from the dark.
In this nightmare there’s no place to hide.
The reality of this is cold and its stark..

Visions of hands reaching out from the dark.
Lurking there just out of sight.
The reality of this is cold and its stark.
Shadows smother my ray of light.

© Copyright 1999 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-09-30 01:57 AM


Terrifying to a child, the Dark truly mimics the womb.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
2 posted 1999-09-30 03:14 AM


Darkness suits you well, Lucie. You should hang out here more often.

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Michael Anderson

May Darkness find you all through the day.



Dragoness
Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513

3 posted 1999-09-30 07:42 AM


Great read....well done!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
4 posted 1999-10-01 09:44 AM


Lucie...I love the entire poem...but really am fond of the last stanza...

Jenny

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