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BoyToy
Junior Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 23
everett, wa, usa

0 posted 1999-09-28 08:41 PM


You tell me you care and that you're sorry,
You beg for my forgiveness and love,
You scream for my affection,
You cry for my attention.
Where were you three years ago when I did the same? Where were you all the countless times I poured out my soul, yearning for your love? Where were you when I needed attention and intimacy?
Oh yeah, you weren't there.
Goodbye my dear, it's time for me to go,
time for me to find love in myself, time for me to be happy.
No I won't give you one more chance, I have for three years. As to your statement; I love you...I say, so what

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A dark, black past is my most valued possession...D. Mustaine

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Tisha
Junior Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 12
Weedsport, NY
1 posted 1999-09-28 11:01 PM


your words speak such power, yet in your voice I know you are longing for love. I think maybe the love you yearn for, the attention you crave and the future you dream of is waiting for. Go to it you only deserve the best!! I LOVE YOU.
JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
2 posted 1999-09-29 06:21 PM


You may think it's not much,but those words are powerful when put together w/emotion.
Keep writing Boy Toy!

Jenny

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