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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Ridden by madness, spiteful steeds two DarkLords sit astride, filled with sadness, nursed with evil deeds, on their loyal hordes they look with pride. Below them rages a battle between wicked evil men, felled by mages like cattle, to sate unholy sin. Demons at their back await a chance to feed as soldiers at each other hack perchance to tease the demons' need. Atrocity eases the boredom of the Dark Lords' eternal life as bloodlust appeases the whoredom of the Misery taken to wife. Even willful slaughter has lost it's dark appeal to evil gods above as blood-stained water, christened by steel, brings truth to the death of love. ©1999 DreamEvil ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Let this DarkLord be the first to say; A wickedly, flowing sentiment, Dream. as bloodlust appeases the whoredom of the Misery taken to wife. Nothing short of awesome. ------------------ Michael Anderson Loneliness isn't in being alone; Loneliness is alone in being. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Bad asssss can be Dream! I loved the way you formatted this. I rarely have read something so easy to read, and so enjoyable! Freaknik!!! |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Just like you Lords to sit and watch while the peons get slaughtered.Liked this one brother mine! ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Dark Lord, please meet the Dark Master. This Darklord of yours is quite beguiling. Now,one of many favorite of yours! Jenny [This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 09-28-1999).] [This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 09-28-1999).] |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Yet another gem of wickedness, Dream. I especially loved the fourth stanza. ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wow, Soul-bro, I loved the way this flowed. Excellent, well done  ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I always loved this sinister piece. It still retains it's Dark Brillance. I hope the new poets here, will read and enjoy too  Jenny Lee ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. [This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 11-25-1999).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Awesome tale Dream Evil!! I bow to yet another Dark Lord ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
A powerfully Dark Tale. Loved this one. The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
Very nice, you illistrated this one well. There's a peace inside us all Let it be your friend It will help you carry on In the end There's a peace inside us all -Creed |
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