Marital Bliss (Challenge from Michael)

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Marital Bliss (Challenge from Michael)

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-09-27 06:00 AM

The solitude that comes with your presence,
becomes a silence grating to my ears.
I find myself longing for your absence,
then praying you don't outlast me in years.
Your nagging is a monotonous drone,
pounding a railroad spike clean through my head.
Your part in my madness I'll make you own,
since I know I'm better off with you dead.
Watch out dear for strychnine in the toothpaste,
or God forbid, you could fall down the stairs.
Lord knows no one would call your death a waste,
so please dear let me catch you unawares.
Breathing the same air as you makes me retch,
because you've become something I revile.
You've nagged me into a miserable wretch,
laughing at the pain you caused all the while.

I loved you once and for that you die slow.
My dear it's true that you reap what you sow.

©1999 DreamEvil

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-09-27 06:04 AM

Wow.........

You know, I could send that to an old friend of mine, with a change of title, and it would express everything I feel toward her....

Wonderful poem

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 1999-09-27 07:56 PM

Soul-Bro, loved this, this was really really good

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Dragoness
Senior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 513

4 posted 1999-09-28 01:10 AM

I liked this much!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

5 posted 1999-09-28 03:59 AM

"...let me catch you unawares"
I don't know what to say. This is one of your best yet. Truly you have faced a side that I could never face myself.
Is it strange that I find beauty in this though it is filled with hate?

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

6 posted 1999-09-28 07:28 AM

LOL!
Ok, maybe I'm a sicko, but I thought this was funny as he... you know what! I'm still laughing!

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

7 posted 1999-09-28 10:26 AM

Brava!!!
What more astounding words do you have in that Evil head of yours?

Jenny

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