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Artur Hawkwing
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since 1999-06-30
Posts 444
USA

0 posted 1999-09-26 07:04 PM


When I saw you, I forgot life,
your face was mythical-
with understanding it looked,
eternal grace laid upon your face;
I am but mortal, not divine,
but your face sent a thousand oceans falling
from the foundations of the earth
upon my soul, as you looked upon me,
o but that was so long ago, my friend.
People would laugh at me,
but you knew what they were thinking,
they cursed you for being righteous,
for you were perfect, my friend.
No one on earth is perfect, but you were,
my friend, why did you have to die?
You were always there for me,
you had the heart of a baby, blue and true,
yet your mind was ancient with wisdom;
where are you, my friend, why did you die?
You looked after me like a brother,
you were so compassionate, hating nothing,
yet you were confused, and you hurt for us,
o why did the tears have to fall?
You spoke no lies, your words were so powerful,
people stared after you in shocked silence,
in their heart they laughed a sea bitter,
for they were green with envy and corrupt;
You were the infallible, always bearing,
you humbled yourself, you held your hand out,
you let yourself be seen weak,
as the people cursed you for being strong.
I hold you in memories that shall never die,
for you were my one true friend.

© Copyright 1999 Artur Hawkwing - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
1 posted 1999-09-27 02:13 AM


A very heartfelt image here, Artur. I welcome you to the Dark forum, a most appropriate piece. Thank you for sharing with us.


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Michael Anderson


Loneliness isn't in being alone;
Loneliness is alone in being.


Artur Hawkwing
Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 444
USA
2 posted 1999-09-28 10:23 PM


Michael,

I thank you for welcoming me into the Dark Passions forum.... I was unsure if this piece fitted in this forum or not. Thanks.

Artur

Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
3 posted 1999-11-05 02:39 PM


Artur,
This is a most beautiful tribute to someone who must have taken a piece of you when they left. I'm truly sorry for your loss. Come again when you're ready.

DB

Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

4 posted 1999-11-06 04:06 AM


Enjoyed this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
5 posted 1999-11-06 07:43 AM


I liked this very much,indeed an enjoyable read

Jenny

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

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