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ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin

0 posted 1999-09-24 06:41 PM


I saw you and I wasnt able to think
you made me feel needed, between us a link

First time we met, did not know what to say
things in my mind, I could not quite relay

All of this past us, yet felt the same way
being together, not missing a day

Never a bad word between us to call
how could I know that you would let me fall

All of the good times, and all of the bad
never a dull moment, was there to be had

Being around you was what made me tick
the kissing, carressing, the soft little lick

The hugging, the holding, the warmth we did feel
nothing about you to me seemed quite real

The laughing, the crying, you holding me tight
you touching me softly, would take away fright

We started as freinds, and grew to want more
we ended as lovers, my insides felt torn

I loved you, I held you, gave to you myself
my body, my spirit, my mind and my health

You twisted, and burned it, and made me feel dead
you hurt me, you hate me, you played with my head

Not yet a time that I hear our song play
Cant listen without crying, and make it ok

Still see something thinking, you'd really like that
smile, then remember, feel pain and go black

Much time has now passed, and your fading away
I think it, and wish it, and to be free I pray

Years later, you found me, together we cried
You offered your life, but our love to me died.

You understand what you did, and you know it was wrong
I felt your heart pounding out our favorite song

I'm glad you're Ok, I still wish you no harm
This hurts me like hell, please let go of my arm

Let me walk away now, before I think twice
Goodbye, wish you well and no lonely nights



[This message has been edited by ThUnDeRkYsS (edited 09-27-1999).]

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ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin
1 posted 1999-09-29 09:27 PM


Remember Mel... only if your already DOWN! ;(
JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
2 posted 1999-10-01 09:45 AM


You should put this to music....


Jenny

Dragoness
Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513

3 posted 1999-10-01 10:41 AM


I would have loved these words a week ago! Very meaningful to me....Thank-You.

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