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Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

0 posted 1999-09-24 02:07 PM


I'm going down
Down
Down to the bottom
To rest with the fishbones
Sand
Darkness
Let me go
You're not pulling me up....
I'm dragging you down
So cold
Leave
Leave this numbing place
It will destroy you
I belong here
I'm as good as dead
I can't hurt anyone else here,
Can I?
Won't I ever be worthless?
Can'tyou all stop caring?
Will you ever just let me be?
Let me die......
Hopeless
I'm down
And never coming up for air
Suffocating
Drowning
Stifling
I'm sorry.
I never wanted this
(Silence)

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

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JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-09-24 03:04 PM


I felt like I was going Down... LOL!!!
Our work is so different...yet,I really enjoy reading your"Thoughts" Thanks for sharing your Dark Passions :~)

Jenny

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