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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396


0 posted 1999-09-21 06:37 PM


God, I wish I could go back
to being what I was.
Cutting no one any slack
and hurting them, "Because."
I want to carve out this heart
and toss it to the dogs.
Peel this pain back to the start
and go to sawing logs.
Nothing is worse than sorrow,
except perhaps disdain.
I'll be myself tomorrow,
tonight I'll feel the pain.


©1999 DreamEvil

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
1 posted 1999-09-21 06:43 PM


Sometimes feeling just plain sucks, huh?
Oh well, the pendulum swings and next thing you know, you're cold and desensitized, where we all would love to be at times.
Excellent piece, DreamEvil, thanks for visiting.



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Michael Anderson


And so, being young and dipt in folly
I fell in love with melancholy,
But dreams - of those who dream as I,
Aspiringly, are damned, and die:


EAP


Lucie
Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077
Houston
2 posted 1999-09-21 11:11 PM


I enjoyed this poem Dream. Sometimes I wish I could just shut it all off myself. I hate that feeling.. Sleep does not come easily to those who are feeling emotional pain.
JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 1999-09-22 08:38 AM


Another good one DE,
I really like the entire piece.so vivid.
excellent!!!

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Helewes

Beki
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA
4 posted 1999-09-25 01:22 AM


Feelin it with ya...well spoken!
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