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BoyToy
Junior Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 23
everett, wa, usa

0 posted 1999-09-21 12:39 PM


The crimson ooze against the wall
oh the sparkle of it all
the lifeless eyes staring out
never more burdened, never a doubt

Why did he have to go, why was he the one?
because he was there, better than none
just a helpless victim in the night
never had time to feel the fright

he's gone now, to a better place
no more will the worlds torments see his face
perhaps I am a savior, taking him from here
sleep now, for your eternity is near

Yes, you fear me, for I am hated
I cant help it, for now I am sated

© Copyright 1999 BoyToy - All Rights Reserved
Tisha
Junior Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 12
Weedsport, NY
1 posted 1999-09-21 11:34 PM


Nice work, you get better and better. I will await you next entry. with the deepest dark passion. Tisha
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
2 posted 1999-09-22 06:07 PM


Excellent piece, Boy Toy.
oh, the price of pleasure.

Michael

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