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Dark Poetry #1

No title... please read and give me your opinion.

gOdeSslOve
Junior Member

since 1999-09-12

Posts 23
Santa Clara CA

0 posted 1999-09-21 02:40 AM

Dark wishes yet unfold
Asking with a whispering shame,
"Baby, hold me close"
Beautiful lullaby he sang
His arm warming my embrace
As his lips tendering my ear

Feeling him so
I have fallen deep
I am his butterly,
he spreads my wings

Shivers upon my legs when he holds me so
I close my eyes
As the wetness of his lips caress the
thin line between my neck and
my breast

Carefully surrounding me like gold
I kiss him sweetly
Tasting his honey
Lips, lightly coated

The feeling of his chest
As it endured mine
The smell of his neck
The beautiful shine from his eyes
The sweetness of his breath.

The touching of fingers
As they wonder my body

Warmness from heaven,
his embrace holds me so...

gOdeSslOve
Junior Member

since 1999-09-12

Posts 23
Santa Clara CA

1 posted 1999-09-21 02:51 AM

Gosh, i just read my poem. It's so sad that he is no longer with me.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

2 posted 1999-09-21 06:24 AM

Quite erotic and sad - I feel your loss.

------------------
Michael Anderson

And so, being young and dipt in folly
I fell in love with melancholy,
But dreams - of those who dream as I,
Aspiringly, are damned, and die:

EAP

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

3 posted 1999-09-21 07:26 AM

So sad and beautiful Goddess
Yes love and loss makes us all
feel a pain that sometimes can only be expressed through our written words.
Many Blessings to Sweety.

Jennylee

[This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 09-21-1999).]

gOdeSslOve
Junior Member

since 1999-09-12

Posts 23
Santa Clara CA

4 posted 1999-09-21 03:34 PM

Thank you both so very much i really appreciate your words.

Love, peace & happineSs,
gOdeSs

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