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gOdeSslOve
Junior Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 23
Santa Clara CA

0 posted 1999-09-16 10:41 PM


I circulize in wisdom
Take the punishment that forsakes
and bounds my virgin
white...
vale...
I sleep into a heaven of dreams
That's where i and him became
my prayer...
::whispers:: "destined lovers"..
His eyes speak my name
as i treasure his
every


Last


Breath

Mouths become a bliss of pleasure
breathing
Lust
tastes of pure love as a sin
insanity

::softly whispers:: Kiss Me...

[This message has been edited by gOdeSslOve (edited 09-17-99).]

© Copyright 1999 gOdeSslOve - All Rights Reserved
Beki
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA
1 posted 1999-09-17 01:25 AM


This poem is awesome.."His eyes speak my name
as i treasure his every Last Breath" and
"insanity
::softly whispers:: Kiss Me..."

Pure sensuality...! Good work! :-)




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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society

gOdeSslOve
Junior Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 23
Santa Clara CA
2 posted 1999-09-17 01:27 AM


Thank you so much dear. Aww... i'm so glad you liked it he, hee
Bless you!

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AmOr y Salud,
gOddeSslOve

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 1999-09-17 01:33 AM


Indeed, a stirring piece.
Moves me toward madness - I likes.

Michael

gOdeSslOve
Junior Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 23
Santa Clara CA
4 posted 1999-09-17 01:36 AM


He, hee... Thanks Michael...

Love, peace & HappineSs,
gOdeSslOve

JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
5 posted 1999-09-17 09:39 AM


Great work!!!
Madness pushes us into states of utter pain
or ecstasy. Keep them coming Goddess!!

gOdeSslOve
Junior Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 23
Santa Clara CA
6 posted 1999-09-17 04:04 PM


Thank you so much jenny... i appreciate your comments...
Much luV 2 u,
gOdeSs

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