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FiendingAngel New Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 5Minnesota |
Impress my eyes, your pretty face. Far to known, close to this place. Love is hate, yes is no. Darling darling just hold close.Dont fret baby, she is here, your own little whore, who steals your fear. Pushed against me, close as can be, you feel the nothing you have put into me. Fear and anger that fill your eyes, is now what darkens my once blue skies. I want to know what makes you real, I ask again, how should I feel? I miss you darling yes I do, where is the hate I see in you? Where are the hundreds now turned to few? Its here, i can feel it, its getting close, I'm loosing grip of what I love most. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I am searching the corners of my mind for an appropriate response to this. This is fabulous to say the least. I am intrigued (maybe even shocked) by what I see in this piece. You've defineately touched a nerve in me which isn't an easy thing to do. Michael |
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FiendingAngel New Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 5Minnesota |
Thank you so much! I really dont get that much credit for my work, its hard for people to understand, Thank you!!! |
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Dusk Treader
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
I was rather shocked by this piece the first time I read it. I had talked with you for a quite a while, and then you pop this at me! An excellent piece of work, like I've stated before.. I stil think it would make good lyrics to a song.. (Me being the Heavy Metal person I am.) :-) ------------------ "Threatened by Shadows at night, and exposed in the light" - Pink Floyd |
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