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Buzzygirl
Junior Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 42
St. Paul, MN USA

0 posted 1999-09-12 05:22 PM



CONNECTION SEVERED

Connection severed;
lesson learned:
Turned back into the dark,
you left me dangling precipitously
like some insipid
question-mark;
How would you act
if you felt you were
spurned,
could you take
it as easily
if the tables were
turned?

Which of your actions
will you continue to defend,
now that it’s already
past the end?

The driving force that was behind
a smile so pristine
quit working like some obsolete,
throwaway machine--
even though the contraption
caused me no end of hurt
I can’t just shut it off
and bury it in the dirt

a faint aura remains
of the energy that made it turn,
it’s glowing like an ionized beam:
it sizzles the skin and burns

I won’t look directly at it,
so, then, what have I learned?

A lesson enjoined, factored by one,
as a child, taught not to look
at the sun
but to preserve the eye, make it last
so turns the eyepiece towards the past

But nothing’s there to comfort me,
it’s dark as far as I can see-
the path where I’d normally
not fear to step
now dimly lit with
uncertainty

So step into the dank unknown I must
But it's better than being locked here in this hell
Where I don't know what's good for me
And no way to win that I can tell

But it's alright, I've made it this far
And I'm not afraid of the dark anymore
No, I am not afraid anymore--
Connection severed;
Lesson learned
--
9/96

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JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-09-14 09:59 PM


But it's alright, I've made it this far
I'm not afraid of the dark any more.
This comes really close to my feelings lately.
You have a way w/words...

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Helewes

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