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Dipali
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since 1999-09-08
Posts 5
Denver,CO,USA

0 posted 1999-09-08 03:35 PM


when I was a child
I dared to Dream
I didn't care
but I always did dare
I dared to Dream.
When I grew up
I Dreamt to dare
I couldn't bear
so I always did fear
I feared to Dream.
Now everything is clear
I live each day
Daring and dreaming,
Never once realising
that the more I dreamt
the more I became weak
weak...to dare.
so now I don't dream
I just...live.

[This message has been edited by Dipali (edited 09-08-99).]

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poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
1 posted 1999-09-08 04:17 PM


Ah, this is absolutely fabulous! I love how you kept going back & forth with the idea! Unique !

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale



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