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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396


0 posted 1999-08-31 12:00 PM


Dark Father
who art in Hell,
unholy glee
is my only refrain.
Accept this petitioner
and teach him well
the lessons
and ravages
of pain.

Dark Father,
I demand that
you grant to me
your might,
I must understand
and fight
this onslaught
of goodness
God has
wrought.

Dark Father
smite my enemies
out of hand,
send untold miseries
unto the Light
and disband
the legions
of the
Lamb.

Dark Father
hear my plea,
heed my call,
give unto me
the power that all
mankind
was intently
designed
to rule.


©1999 DreamEvil


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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©



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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
1 posted 1999-08-31 12:10 PM


Quite an interesting prayer DreamEvil,
Just out of curiosity, Do you bleed when sprinkled with holy water?

Michael

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 1999-08-31 07:40 PM


Your pain clearly shows through this! This is the darkest in my eyes!
Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
3 posted 1999-08-31 10:45 PM


oooh, I agree. This may be your darkest that I've seen...wow, exellent work.

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller


~one voice~
Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664
Billings, MT USA
4 posted 1999-09-01 01:40 AM


Very dark, Dream... almost so dark it's scary... um, you don't eat small children or anything do you? j/k lol I like it!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."



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