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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
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0 posted 1999-08-31 09:07 AM


At a challenge from Michael


Lavishly I lick the blood off my chin.
I look in the cold eyes of my lover.
The coppery, sweet taste makes my head spin.
Ghosts of past victims about him hover.

I look in the cold eyes of my lover.
I savor the haunting scent of fresh death.
Ghosts of past victims about him hover.
I inhale the fragrance with every breath.

I savor the haunting scent of fresh death.
Love swirls in a sickening miasma.
I inhale the fragrance with every breath.
God damned me with this hunger for plasma.

Love swirls in a sickening miasma.
I tip back my head and laugh in delight.
God damned me with this hunger for plasma.
I live in Darkness, a thing born of night.

I tip back my head and laugh in delight.
Another lover in my arms has died.
I live in Darkness, a thing born of night.
Blood-born, with the Darkness I have allied.

Another lover in my arms has died.
The coppery, sweet taste makes my head spin.
Blood-born, with the Darkness I have allied.
Lavishly I lick the blood off my chin.


©1999 DreamEvil


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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©




[This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 08-31-99).]

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~one voice~
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since 1999-07-08
Posts 664
Billings, MT USA
1 posted 1999-08-31 09:15 AM


:Pblech!!! More power to you, Baby! Eeww... is all I have to say! I cringe with the visions you've placed in my brain!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."



WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 1999-08-31 09:42 AM


Quite interesting one! Original perspective here! Another great piece of work!
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 1999-08-31 11:58 AM


Awesome, DreamEvil,
You have done quite well with this.
You know, I think we bring out the worst in each other which in our case ain't a bad thing at all, or is it?

Michael

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