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Loranth
Junior Member
since 1999-08-24
Posts 19


0 posted 1999-08-24 11:43 AM


Darkness consumes my mind.
Darkness consumes my soul.

My world draws black.
My world turns cold.

Pain engulfs me.
Strength fuels me.

Hate empowers me.
Love keeps me sane.

Fear drives me.
Sanctuary turns me away.

Darkness is all I see.
Darkness is all I feel.

Pain is what I deal.
Hate is how I am paid.

Death fears me.
Hell welcomes me.

Light hides from me.
Fear finds me.

Life hates me.
The dead love me.

I am all.
I am nothing. . .

© Copyright 1999 Loranth - All Rights Reserved
INclan
Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024
Indiana, USA
1 posted 1999-08-25 09:42 AM


While I liked the contrasts you used,
You are still confused.
Depression can take many forms
Lieing that these are norms.
Advice to you I will not give, Save
That you alone choose how you live.

INclan

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