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JP
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

0 posted 1999-08-20 09:45 PM


For my entire life,
I have been searching for home.
Home is where you belong,
fit in, are accepted.

Home is where the heart is,
old timers say.
Home is where your hat is,
was always my sly reply.

As a kid I wanted home,
a place to belong,
to be me, unconditionally.
I never found it.

As a teen, I searched,
for that place for my heart.
That place that say to me
you are finally home.

Thirty-five now,
thinking I found it.
But merely deluding myself.
Never allowed to be me...
partially? Yes. But not completely.

Dark currents run unexposed,
for fear of driving you away.
now you've left, I suppose
and this house we hold
feels less like home than before.

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Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
JP




[This message has been edited by JP (edited 10-03-1999).]

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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
1 posted 1999-08-20 10:41 PM


Very good and very sad, JP. I've always thought home is where you feel safest. Whether it's in someone's arms or alone in a chair....hard to redefine throughout our lives though........I don't mean to sound corny, but you will always have a home here!
moonmoon
Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277
TX , USA
2 posted 1999-08-22 01:19 AM




WOW...You just made me cry..Looks like I am having a bad day myself...
To me, home is the place where you can be just plain YOU & still be loved without restrain..-sigh-

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"No one was ever ruined from without;
The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr



JP
Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343
Loomis, CA
3 posted 1999-08-22 07:46 PM


Wouldn't it be nice Moonmoon, if one could find a place like that?

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Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
JP



JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
4 posted 1999-10-02 09:31 PM


I found this, and love the honesty of it...

Jenny

Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
5 posted 1999-11-05 09:52 PM


A place that says Home to me...That would be the sweetest place I've ever known. Still looking.

DB

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