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Do Angel's Fall Without You There?
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Do Angel's Fall Without You There? |
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IsabelleSkye Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 253 |
Dark sun Mountain sighs Black gull cries Close your eyes Search inside If you don't look Does she still fly? Painted wind Raging sea Aging moon Can you break her? Can you make her? Night's so cold Story's untold Riddles unfold Does she spread her wings Listening to the earth as it sings? If you walk away Heart turned to stone Does she fly all alone? Does she fall without you there? |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Points to ponder most definately, Izzy. Quite intriguing. Michael |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Let me just point something out here: I'm ALWAYS there. Angels only fall out the sky when they stop trying to fly and fold their wings. I think, young lady, it's about time you started flapping again! ------------------ I believe in fairy tales but then I'm just a silly romantic, what do I know? |
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Majere Junior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 32 |
"painted wind" wonderful phrase! Nice work. ------------------ Such is the way to immortality ;) |
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Loranth Junior Member
since 1999-08-24
Posts 19 |
i rather like what you have done. i look at the words and such that you have written and find myself wondering the same things. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Beautiful beautiful piece - I also enjoyed your choice of words & colorful thoughts....and yes, she does fly when you're not looking, and no, she does not fall! Glorious Izzy - you fly, girl! ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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