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Alicat
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since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094
Coastal Texas

0 posted 1999-08-16 11:18 PM



It's dark again,
another day slept through.
Must be working late hours,
or something.
Can't remember.
Just writing in my diary again;
letters to myself
waiting for me to write back.
Hmph.
Next thing you know
I'll be talking to myself.
Hungry.
Empty fridge.
And the roaches scuttling inside
are looking mighty tasty.
Sick, bastard, real sick.
Strange dreams again,
violent and elusive.
Feel icky and funky.
Oh Christ!!!
Went to wash up.
Blood on my face
and black skin
under my nails!
So hungry.
Splashed water on my face.
Some blood trickled in my mouth.
Hungry.
Craving more.

Alicat

© Copyright 1999 Alastair Adamson - All Rights Reserved
poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
1 posted 1999-08-17 12:31 PM


Ummmm, Alicat ? Is this you on the weekends? Should I come clean out your frig for you, dear? You just let me know !! Frightful piece I must say ! What a sick lunatic ! (Not you Alicat - your character in the story) LOL

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet


Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
2 posted 1999-08-17 08:18 PM


I hate to ask this? Could you be a vampire, my dear? You might want to call the vampire doctor and get the vampire cat scan......
(very good poem by the way!)

elvira
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since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
3 posted 1999-08-19 02:56 AM


i always love a good vampyre poem...and you tackled it from such an unusual angle, Alicat !
Majere
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 32

4 posted 1999-08-20 01:43 PM


Nice job! (sounds funny to say that considering the theme of the poem.)

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Such is the way to immortality ;)


Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
5 posted 2000-03-05 11:47 AM


Please Isis...Micheal....forgive me !

67 !

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