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Beyond Breath |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
I shall die. I have no joy in this observation. But then again I have no pain, which in and of itself is not cause for jubilation. It is fact. As sun shall rise and rivers flow unto the sea, it shall be. Man shall propegate. Exist. Then life as we know shall terminate. What lies beyond breath? Death. What lies beyond death? I do not know. I will be dead. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Wow, I really like how you portrayed life as an "observation".....is that what I read? Fabulous, yet so sadly dark....good work! ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
YES..I liked it too..  The depth of the doom is nagging me though!! ------------------ "No one was ever ruined from without; The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr |
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