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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-07-03 03:29 PM



To be formless.

The white-cloud of our being
passing brief within the
sky.

We are subtle in the movements that
we offer.

Like this.

Yet nothing remains in the
wake of empty motions.

And formless...

Our white-cloud passes.

© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-07-03 04:06 PM


Ericc
I'll give you a big yes on this. LOL

Suetang
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2 posted 2004-07-03 08:15 PM


So very beautiful, Eric.

"We are all angels with only one wing.....
we can fly only be embracing each other"

Take care..........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-07-03 09:00 PM


Wonderful Eric!!
Very much enjoyed!
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

iliana
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4 posted 2004-07-03 09:30 PM


Awesome write, Eric!  Very much enjoyed pondering this.   .......jo
passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-07-04 04:36 AM


I much prefer form and longevity when it comes to clouds
Ericc
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6 posted 2004-07-04 09:41 AM


Aahhhh...Dixie...it's the very formlessness of a cloud that allows it to take the form of our desire within our imagination. And without the kiss that briefness offers...would we hold close and dear the things that pass through our lives?

Formless...brief...we become everything...and live forever.

Love,
Eric

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