How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #32 Archive
 my crayola box
 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

my crayola box

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 05-18-2001
Posts 29020
Gaia


0 posted 07-02-2004 05:37 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Midnitesun



You've colored me in shades of jade,
   outside the line.

The variegated colors played
   tricks each and every time.

You made me think,
   maybe you were the crayon?

Whitewashed canvas again,
   a blank sheet ready for prime.

Who would have thought
   you’d visit my crayola box?

Who would have guessed
   you were a rhyme sublime?

© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
Member Rara Avis
since 10-23-2001
Posts 9867
By the Seaside


1 posted 07-02-2004 05:41 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

I think you've drawn a rainbow here!!

You've colored me in shades of jade,
   outside the line.

So pretty Kacy~
iliana
Member Patricius
since 12-05-2003
Posts 13488
USA


2 posted 07-02-2004 06:18 PM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

Now, this is a very interesting piece....can't wait for the next installment.  I hope there's more 'cuz I really liked this.   ....jo
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 08-14-2001
Posts 37801
Somewhere in time~


3 posted 07-02-2004 06:22 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Very much enjoyed this Kacy..
I have a feeling there is more to tell....
Please do.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Larry C
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 09-10-2001
Posts 10765
United States


4 posted 07-02-2004 07:22 PM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Nice. Got room for some water color? Or better yet some finger paint. Or is that part of the other installments coming?

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Caelestus
since 06-25-99
Posts 67715
Listening to every heart


5 posted 07-02-2004 07:54 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Oh, I'm granting that person a box
of 64...
Patricia
Member Elite
since 04-06-2003
Posts 2232
Missouri


6 posted 07-02-2004 08:06 PM       View Profile for Patricia   Email Patricia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Patricia

Excellent.  Very much enjoyed.

Patricia
Magnus
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 10-10-2001
Posts 14644
South Carolina, USA


7 posted 07-02-2004 08:07 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

Yes, I think 64 might be the number needed.
Enjoyed this Kacy,  an interesting write.
Duncan
Member Ascendant
since 08-07-2001
Posts 5716


8 posted 07-02-2004 08:28 PM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

"Who would have thought
   you’d visit my crayola box?

Who would have guessed
   you were a rhyme sublime?"

Yanno Kacy?  Think I got another one for ya.  You're now the poetic version of Ben & Jerry's.  And I'll have one of those little spoonfuls of each word...  

Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 05-18-2001
Posts 29020
Gaia


9 posted 07-03-2004 12:36 AM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

LOL. I enjoyed all these replies.

But Duncan? You have me falling outta my chair!
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 08-26-99
Posts 46297
displaced


10 posted 07-03-2004 01:29 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

better than what I was thinking at the first sight of the title!
Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 08-27-2002
Posts 40647
Realms of Light


11 posted 07-03-2004 01:33 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

I love your use of colour in this word painting!

Happy holiday hugs,
Linda
Susan
Member Ascendant
since 03-27-2004
Posts 5169
walking the surreal


12 posted 07-03-2004 03:04 PM       View Profile for Susan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan

Color me a smile

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

kayjay
Member Elite
since 06-24-2002
Posts 2334
Oregon


13 posted 07-03-2004 10:51 PM       View Profile for kayjay   Email kayjay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kayjay

I'm always pleased to read those who hear what I cannot.  Nicely done.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 05-18-2001
Posts 29020
Gaia


14 posted 07-06-2004 02:51 AM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

Dixie, Susan, Linda, Ken

THANK YOU!
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 09-16-2007
Posts 8075
Realm of Supernatural


15 posted 11-11-2007 12:55 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #32 >> my crayola box Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors