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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 07-02-2004 08:57 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger


candy coated rocks
with sticky shimmer
underwater looking

in the desert there
by no leaf trees
where their makeup

was pitted
from the wind
that walked in

in high heel shoes
and made sink hole prints
on sunday mornings

before the dawn
turned on her miner's lamp
and looked for the gold

of a sunrise yawning
and the songs too
on the radio

I remember them
how their grooves were full
of melted vinyl

not yet thought as words

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


1 posted 07-02-2004 08:58 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


not yet thought as words

~*~

just those fleeting feelings
knowing the best
is yet to come...

Well done, Sir...always a pleasure to read you.
Enchantress
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since 08-14-2001
Posts 37801
Somewhere in time~


2 posted 07-02-2004 09:03 AM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

"before the dawn
turned on her miner's lamp
and looked for the gold

of a sunrise yawning"

Wonderful!!  Very much enjoyed as usual DS.
~Morning hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 07-02-2004 09:09 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Dark one, as always your words are thought treats...thank you 'n hugs too.
Martie
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4 posted 07-02-2004 11:44 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

DS

"I remember them
how their grooves were full
of melted vinyl

not yet thought as words"

Amazing how you turn an image of thought into words!
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5 posted 07-02-2004 01:43 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Amazing!
iliana
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since 12-05-2003
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6 posted 07-02-2004 04:20 PM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

Your style is very unique.  Many good lines stand on their own.
Dark Stranger
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7 posted 07-03-2004 08:40 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms sunshine, thanks for your early morning eyes, and your lady soft heart

_________

Ms E, thank you so much for the touches

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MS Donna, hugs to you, slow arm kind, thanks for your reads

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MS Martie, thank you lil neighbor, big hand hugs and eye talk.

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Ms Myst' Your amazing was wonderful, thanks for the review

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Ms Iliana,  a texas sized thanks, and a larger appreciation
inkedgoddess
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8 posted 07-03-2004 03:43 PM       View Profile for inkedgoddess   Email inkedgoddess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inkedgoddess

kind of primitive in tone
very unique and good
serenity blaze
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9 posted 07-03-2004 03:57 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

this is so...smiling here.

it's just...

it's

poetry

absolutely beautiful, D

good to read you again m'friend
Honeybee
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since 12-26-1999
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10 posted 07-03-2004 05:41 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee

Damn you sure can write......I love the tone and pace of this poem and as always your imagery and message is way cool.

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

miscellanea
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11 posted 07-03-2004 05:53 PM       View Profile for miscellanea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miscellanea

Dark Stranger,
   I think this is the first time I've read one of yours.  It took me for surprise the first reading it so I read it several times more finding that I liked it a lot.  Enjoyed
              miscellanea
Beki
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12 posted 07-03-2004 10:00 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

amazing imagery as is your gift....love it!
LeeJ
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SE PA


13 posted 07-06-2004 02:56 PM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

sometimes we are blessed with such a feeling that life just doesn't get any better, and that makes the not so good times seem all that more signficant.

When I was little, and something bad would happen, my mom would tell me, it's just life's nature, helping to make you stronger.

Smiles and hugs...good one.
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural


14 posted 11-11-2007 12:58 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed


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