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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
waves rush shoreward into the sand's embrace~ one seagull waits. |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
that is so cool. very good with so little |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I wait with him.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very cool, indeed, Beki -- I heard those birds!  .......jo |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love the discriptiveness of the waiting bird. Awesome poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beki Wonderful poem about a wonderful place. Much enjoyed! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
very good, i am left wondering if the seagull craves for solitude or is aching from loneliness... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 nice! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
wio...a sound... imagery... imagination... well done! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sun sin setting slow cove of dreamers wears footprints sand hands holding time enjoyed the view ms beki |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
It's fun to watch those silly little birds. That walk like Charlie Chaplin. All they need is a little top hat and cain. BonBon  |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Bonnie you make me smile! My dark friend, you do love that cove don't you? How you make me smile too. Thanks everyone for reading, it is a quick familiar moment I felt the need to share...so glad you all enjoyed it and that my simple words took you there with me |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Perfect ! enjoyed. Chris |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'm not generally a big fan of haiku--I can't write them and I don't think the average poet truly captures the essence of the artform. smile. But you did. Loved this. |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Nightshade - thanks for stopping by and Serenity, I appreciate the compliment. I would say first I am not the average poet, and second, my mentor has always insisted they are my true gift. smiles back |
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