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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2004-06-30 11:30 PM


I love the smell of rain
And the thick
Black clouds
And the claps od thunder

But when it starts
To pour down
I run outside
And run through the rain

I run through the rain
Until I see
A bright flash of light
And run for safety

But it sure is fun
Until that lightning strike
Comes from nowhere
To run through the rain

Cold hands means a warm heart

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2004-07-01 03:39 AM


you got that right!
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2004-07-01 03:05 PM


I love the smell of rain, too.  This takes me back to childhood and making mud pies.  Enjoyed.
Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-07-01 03:19 PM


For me rain is best as a sound upon rooftops, but you go girl!

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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