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icebox
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since 2003-05-03
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in the shadows

0 posted 2004-06-30 11:08 PM



Bringing awareness into focus
can often be a chore;
there is no more telling secret
than knowledge,
the blinding urge to run.
We face a choice in this country,
to survive,
or to be torn apart
by wolves hunting in packs,
the politicians lacking heart and focus
fear free people
absent the understanding
that each country is a unique blending
of all its human souls,
that there is no inherent right or wrong
when words used in definition
are restricted.
I believe
there will come an age,
a time
when human evolution
will have passed the vital telling marker
on the road that brings awareness
and final global peace;
we won't see it in this coming vote,
nor will any living eyes
ever
for at least a hundred generations,
with some luck a little less
most likely something more.
The path is strife and hardship
not false humility;
the answer is not politics without substance,
belief without a core;  
the human soul is self-deterministic;
we should not shuffle,
not be ashamed of our accomplishments,
in 400 years on this continent
we did great harm,
but greater good;
we need not wear some off-shore weaving
of false humility,
nor beg
hat in hand
forgiveness for our successes.
We are human;
we are flawed;
it is strength that bears the load.
We will not be deceived by thinking
we've met the Buddha on the road.

©2004 by icebox

© Copyright 2004 icebox - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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Posts 27738

1 posted 2004-06-30 11:11 PM


I said this once before in a reply and although the author understood my intent, he worried that others might think I was attacking him, but it suits here as well:

"If you meet the Buddha on the road, KILL him."

I have missed your wisdom, m'friend.

And? nod...voting may be a lame expression, but I think I'll do it anyway.

you just keep telling it like it is and I'll keep smiling atchoo.

hugs

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
2 posted 2004-06-30 11:14 PM


standing o
Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2004-06-30 11:23 PM


Namaste, m'friend, I love you, and always enjoy reading the thoughts you share.
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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4 posted 2004-06-30 11:32 PM


And here I thought we were on the razor's edge -- well, I think at least some are.  Do you really think it will take that long?  Very much enjoy reading your words.   .....jo
Martie
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5 posted 2004-06-30 11:44 PM


Icebox

I've missed your wise words, my friend, and was so glad to see this tonight.

"We are human;
we are flawed;
it is strength that bears the load."

The above is only one piece of truth I picked from this poem.  

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
6 posted 2004-07-01 12:51 PM


Icebox, I see much insight in your words and a thoughtful heart.  Such consideration of our situation is needed should we not suffer as so many empires in the past have, that of the fateful decline.  Gad but that we could just embrace one another, both our differences and our similarities.  I shall hope that you continue to share your views and I shall continue to consider them.

  Susan
.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
7 posted 2004-07-01 02:21 AM


Icebox - what is the price of wisdom?  I think some of us are paying dues without knowing how much interest is being charged.
But your words are wise, my friend, and perhaps your dues are being put in a savings account for your benefit.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
8 posted 2004-07-01 03:34 AM


I thought at first sight of the title that i really didn't want to read this one...but couldn't resist
Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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Florida
9 posted 2004-07-01 10:41 AM


You always blow me away.

Sometime when you are in my neck of the woods we are going to go have a drink...you will talk and I will listen.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
10 posted 2004-07-01 11:24 AM


I believe
there will come an age,
a time
when human evolution
will have passed the vital telling marker
on the road that brings awareness
and final global peace;

~*~

I believe that, myself.
Well done, Sir.

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
11 posted 2004-07-01 11:27 AM


As usual, reading you inspires and deepens, my friend...although, I must admit, licking the razor's edge played havoc on my tongue...
(see if I walk your path anymore!)

Much-o enjoyed this...

jwesley

wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn
12 posted 2004-07-01 05:23 PM


I've been saying for a couple of years now that we (humans)are on the cusp of something...
whether or not that "something" is wonderful would depend on what we do with this most recent opportunity to de-claw intolerance.


But? what do I know? I'm a frickin' hermit.

Namaste

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