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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 I shook hands with time tried to make peace but from your memory there is no release there just is no letting go no way to be free you always were the best part of me the best in life that I sweetly recall the best way a heart can fall my favorite whisper my softest sigh the deepest of oceans brightest star, in my sky Every wish I ever wanted to come true each one filled with ‘let him love me too’ I shook hands with time there is no peace we can make you will always be my endless ache ~SEA~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SEA Enjoyed the thoughts, the write and the read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Susan, such a bittersweet write! You sure know how to tug at the heartstrings. Love this ... Hugs~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, smiling here... |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
this is great sea bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I think I have one of those myself  |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
SEA: This is so emotional. I can understand how it feels to be completed by someone and have that amazing person taken away and left feeling so empty! Hope things get better in time for you! Lisa ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
you have written your heart and it shows...how lovely it is...  There's a place I like to hide-open your mind to me-Visualise your dream- Record it in the present tense, I am smiling next to you, in silent lucidity |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
THIS is an incredible poem. And picture to go along with it. I think you're turning me into a male moth. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
ouchers! But, SEA, this was an incredible and powerful write!  .......jo |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is definitely a heartstring tugger..beautiful SEA. Maree The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
So very poignant. Eric |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"I shook hands with time there is no peace we can make you will always be my endless ache" Ah, but it hurts so good...  Hiya Seagirl!!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
your heart is so lovely Sea. I am so pleased to see your words again. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Awwwww. There ya go again. Writing thangs my heart desires. Why are you soooooo good? Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
oh say can you SEA any better poetry well I don't think so Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I wanted to highlight a verse, but they are all my favourite so I didn't know which to choose! I feel all my chords being struck one after the other. A timely discovery. *hug*, Lizzie. "Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake |
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