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with you


0 posted 06-30-2004 11:07 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SEA



I shook hands with time
tried to make peace
but from your memory
there is no release

there just is no letting go
no way to be free
you always were
the best part of me

the best in life
that I sweetly recall
the best way
a heart can fall

my favorite whisper
my softest sigh
the deepest of oceans
brightest star, in my sky

Every wish
I ever wanted to come true
each one filled with
‘let him love me too’

I shook hands with time
there is no peace we can make
you will always be
my endless ache

~SEA~

© Copyright 2004 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 06-30-2004 11:12 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

SEA
Enjoyed the thoughts, the write and the read.
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


2 posted 06-30-2004 11:27 AM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Oh Susan, such a bittersweet write!
You sure know how to tug at the heartstrings.
Love this ...
Hugs~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


3 posted 06-30-2004 11:44 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Oh, smiling here...
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state of mind


4 posted 06-30-2004 12:06 PM       View Profile for bslicker   Email bslicker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bslicker

this is great sea

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

passing shadows
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displaced


5 posted 06-30-2004 12:31 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

I think I have one of those myself

SwEeTnSeXy18
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nc


6 posted 06-30-2004 02:29 PM       View Profile for SwEeTnSeXy18   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SwEeTnSeXy18

SEA: This is so emotional. I can understand how it feels to be completed by someone and have that amazing person taken away and left feeling so empty! Hope things get better in time for you!

Lisa

~in order to gain, you have to lose~

Susan
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7 posted 06-30-2004 02:55 PM       View Profile for Susan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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In Your Poetic Mind


8 posted 06-30-2004 03:20 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

you have written your heart and it shows...how lovely it is...

There's a place I like to hide-open your mind to me-Visualise your dream- Record it in the present tense, I am smiling next to you, in silent lucidity

PKreturns
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9 posted 06-30-2004 04:31 PM       View Profile for PKreturns   Email PKreturns   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PKreturns

THIS is an incredible poem. And picture to go along with it. I think you're turning me into a male moth.
iliana
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10 posted 06-30-2004 04:52 PM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

ouchers! But, SEA, this was an incredible and powerful write!   .......jo
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11 posted 06-30-2004 04:53 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

This is definitely a heartstring tugger..beautiful SEA.

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

Ericc
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12 posted 07-01-2004 02:55 PM       View Profile for Ericc   Email Ericc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ericc

So very poignant.

Eric
Duncan
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"I shook hands with time
there is no peace we can make
you will always be
my endless ache"

Ah, but it hurts so good...  
Hiya Seagirl!!!

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14 posted 07-01-2004 03:31 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

your heart is so lovely Sea. I am so pleased to see your words again.
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Deep in the heart


15 posted 07-02-2004 01:57 AM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

Awwwww.  There ya go again.  Writing thangs my heart desires.

Why are you soooooo good?

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Interloper
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Deep in the heart


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oh say can you SEA
any better poetry
well I don't think so

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


17 posted 12-01-2004 04:18 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

I wanted to highlight a verse, but they are all my favourite so I didn't know which to choose! I feel all my chords being struck one after the other. A timely discovery.
*hug*, Lizzie.

"Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake

 
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