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LeeJ
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0 posted 2004-06-30 09:15 AM



Covet my ear, prince charming
So we’re intimate strangers
Allotted until mid-night
That’s more then some people have
I’m inside your ideas
Simple short story with few words
What freedom may I effectively communicate?
Our photo is enhanced by a golden frame
Sprawling knowledge by contrast
Leaves me bemused to your radical intuition
Proving immovable
Pushing the good bye away
Kissing me with coercive persuasion
Your passion springboards
Where our similar imagination
Organizes an ocean of elaborations
Abstract, breathless and exciting
Smile at my questions
Impact me with your voice of livelihood
Where does your revenue come from?
I want the right time to emerge
And incite change
I’m a nomad at heart
And my limos waiting
Your mind has never been more spacious
Transported into a paradise
I’m peaceful when left alone
Toxic when forced
So, paint me the quiet alone with you
Don’t take me too seriously
You’re a man who develops understanding
Wearing my silk kimono
Where wandering strands of golden hair
Weave a texture of glow
I’m ready for the part
If you’d like, call me Cinderella
Through away constraints and embrace life
It is a fair assumption that my pumpkin’s double parked
I am nude and seen by you
Yet, you recognize the self of heart
You know my needs, my wants, and desires
It wouldn’t take much
I’ll promise to give the good fairy
The next few years off
For as long as you want

© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2004-06-30 09:25 AM


Oh, Cinderella, you go girl! That was one very amusing piece of writing!

~ May the Good Fairy protect your double-parked pumpkin from a getting parking ticket!


Linda

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-06-30 12:43 PM


thanks for this today Lee
garysgirl
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3 posted 2004-06-30 01:16 PM


Lee, I  this. Cinderella is one
of my favorites and you dressed
the story up wonderfully!! Thanks
for sharing with us.
Hugs,
Ethel

iliana
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4 posted 2004-06-30 05:33 PM



jwesley
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5 posted 2004-06-30 05:39 PM


enjoyed his my friend...

jwesley

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