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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2004-06-30 07:57 AM


Space studies intense imagery
Weaving progress akin to impulse
There is now a new look, green, ripe
Curves coming close, nestling cross-fertilization
Bonding militant doubleness

Do not deny the instance

Modest colors become suggestions
Conceiving a child in willed images
Nude words whisper to assertion
Semblance for desire, memorable certain

Do not deny the instance

Struggling for external form
Dance with suggestions
The artifice of eternity’s stature
For beauty is not simply a line of vision
But a determining focus of relation
Giving close attention to the care
Metaphorical and symbolic meanings

Do not deny the instance

This may embrace a sequence
For great change and diversity
Might malign the eye, heart and mind
Ominous in its promise
Change is growing pregnant
With transformations brave and determined
Along with play of possibility
Trinity of copula wherein lies the mystery
Equivalent parallel from shaken canopies
Balancing all spiritual forces combined
There is a graphic space aligned

Linguistic love walks with sight
Inheriting a circle close-fitting
Do not deny courage for what is pure
Or their meaningful suggestion of metaphores
Sounds of words with noble accents
Unfurling, moving naturally forward

Giving smiles from a labor of tears
Look what we've become
Time has healed our wounds
Without your love where would I be?
Who would I be?
Let me see you energize brightly
You are life instinctive
An expanding version of modern art
on the canvas of history
Our passionate mid-summer conference
painted for us to see, to find all hidden meanings
we are the yet to be


© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-06-30 08:17 AM


LeeJ
"We are and yet to be" if we give ourselves a chance, enjoyed the read.

PKreturns
Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362
New Orleans, LA
2 posted 2004-06-30 04:36 PM


Huh?
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
3 posted 2004-06-30 04:45 PM


"smiles from a labor of tears
Look what we've become
Time has healed our wounds
Without your love where would I be?
Who would I be?
Let me see you energize brightly
You are life instinctive
An expanding version of modern art
on the canvas of history
Our passionate mid-summer conference
painted for us to see, to find all hidden meanings
we are the yet to be"

LeeJ, this was absolute brilliantly written.  Much enjoyed!   ...jo

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
4 posted 2004-07-01 11:41 PM


LeeJ
I found such vigor and passion in your write, to attend so to another heart is very giving.  
TD

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