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Open Poetry #32

From Within Me To Within You

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

0 posted 2004-06-30 01:13 AM

When you feel a warm breeze
brush lightly pass you...
It'll only be my spirit

When you look upon the night sky
and see the brightest star...
it'll only be my spirit sending a kiss

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-06-30 01:40 AM

You are a shinning star! Enjoyed.....jo

anawnda
Member

since 2002-07-26

Posts 113

2 posted 2004-06-30 02:18 AM

i love this poem, i dnt know why but i would describe it as dreamy and whimsical albeit sad.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-06-30 04:02 AM

precious

Kevo
Member

since 2004-06-02

Posts 466
Navarro County, Texas, USA

4 posted 2004-06-30 04:22 AM

Very poignant, thoughtful, and loving message for a very lucky person.

Kevin

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2004-06-30 11:28 AM

"only be"...

Strike "only"...

it is.

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