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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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0 posted 2004-06-29 11:34 PM



Three D

Always we become
Each to the other
Passions raft on emotion’s sea
Intense boils, a sauna that warms the air
Our mouths explore the wilderness of lust
To taste the sweet robust of giving
The swirl of moonlight
…Destination…
…Definition…
…Drive…

Copyright Kkh 6/29/04

© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
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1 posted 2004-06-30 12:54 PM


"Intense boils, a sauna that warms the air
Our mouths explore the wilderness of lust
To taste the sweet robust of giving"

You serve Passion well, Kathleen!  Vivid and beautiful!   .....jo

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-06-30 04:18 AM


very nicely done!
Susan
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3 posted 2004-06-30 07:16 PM


Whew-  

  Susan

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4 posted 2004-06-30 07:31 PM


a double "Whewww"....  Nice write K.  well
done.

Ericc
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5 posted 2004-07-01 02:53 PM


Wow...I loved this!!

Eric

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