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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2004-06-29 07:41 PM


Every time I see
Your brown eyes
And your handsome smile
My heart does a flip
Like it knows I like him

He says one word to me
And it is like
I might just faint
Because he never used
To talk to me

It is like
He is part
Of my soul now

Now I just wish
I would not act
So stupid around him

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-06-29 07:43 PM


Stupidity decreases as familiarity and comfort increase.  Been there, done that.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2004-06-29 07:56 PM


Oh, have I ever been there! ~ and altho' it was embarrassing, it was also a real rush being in his presence! ~ and he must have seen past the gushing schoolgirlish antics because we're together now!

My "wings" are crossed for you!

Warm hugs and a smile of understanding,
Linda


UniqueFreak
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since 2004-01-09
Posts 62
Scotland
3 posted 2004-06-29 08:39 PM


i have a theory on this! if you can act stupid, and feel comfortable enough to pick your nose and burp real loud...all within the first few times meeting a guy, and he dont run like the wind in the opposite direction...then its a guy to hold onto cuz he likes you as you..the real you!

but anyways... i like it I been there also!

stephi

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-06-29 09:08 PM


I know this feeling..and know what?
You aren't really acting stupid at all..
you just feel that you are.
Best of luck Julie.
Hugs~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
5 posted 2004-06-29 09:48 PM


Love can make us crazy sometimes, Julie.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
6 posted 2004-06-30 04:32 AM


good write Julie
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