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Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2004-06-29 10:18 AM


The fear I see when I look in your eyes,
Makes you believe I tell no lies.
The fear I see in the back of your mind,
Makes you believe I'm one of a kind.
The struggle I see when I peer into your eyes,
Makes me believe you're full of sighs.
The fear I see in the back of your mind,
Makes me believe the answers you can't find.
The doubt I see when I look in your eyes,
Makes you believe I could scorch the skies.
The fear I see in the back of your mind,
Makes you believe with chains I'll bind.
The hollowness you see when you look in my eyes,
Makes you wonder if I tell any lies.
The fear you can't see in the back of my mind,
Makes you believe I'm one of a kind.
The struggle you can't see when you look in my eyes,
Makes you believe I get those natural highs.
The fear you don't find in the back of my mind,
Makes you believe I'm one of a kind.
The doubt you won't see when you look in my eyes,
Makes you believe I would scorch the skies.
The fear you don't find in the back of my mind,
Makes you believe with these chains I'll bind.
The fear I see when I look in your eyes,
Makes you believe I'm one of a kind.
The fear I leave in the back of your mind,
Makes you believe I'm....one of a kind.

Victims....aren't we all.

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just out of reach
1 posted 2004-06-29 10:22 AM


Good write Snowflake...but fear and doubt are not a good combo for a relationship. No? Then again, I could be wrong...heee heee.
hugs, Chris

Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion
2 posted 2004-06-29 10:25 AM


thank ya Chris...fear and doubt arent good friends but...nevertheless...they go hand in hand

Victims....aren't we all.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2004-06-29 12:17 PM


Dear Hot Flakes, you've got me thoroughly convinced! You definitely are "One of a Kind"! lol

This was a trip and a half!

Love & Light,
EA

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-06-29 12:24 PM


agreeing with Linda
Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
5 posted 2004-06-29 01:00 PM


im not a one of a kind im just...unique and weird thanks guys

Victims....aren't we all.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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6 posted 2004-06-30 01:25 AM


Yes, I would say you are one of a kind.... an intense read!
Paula Finn
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missouri
7 posted 2004-06-30 09:39 AM


LOL you have been one of a kind since day one kiddo...liked this one
LeeJ
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8 posted 2004-06-30 10:02 AM


fear makes for distrust, and sometimes the fear you may feel is legitimate...once someone lies, there is no return...its an infidelity to ones soul, not to mention your mate.  

Good one

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