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kaile
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0 posted 2004-06-28 04:15 PM



a lack of focus
as no one subject
stands out prominently

mirroring my reality
of looking at life


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Larry C
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1 posted 2004-06-28 04:26 PM


kaile,
Okay let me get this straight. Are you saying you've lost your focus on life and nothing of purpose stands out? Yeah right...though you faked it well!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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2 posted 2004-06-29 01:30 PM


Sometimes, it's that very lack of focus that lets us see things we might otherwise have missed! *S* Well done!
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3 posted 2004-06-29 07:21 PM


kaile -- interesting comparison; enjoyed.....take care, jo
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4 posted 2004-06-29 07:37 PM


So, this makes you a generalist
rather than a specialist; someone who sees the WHOLE not just the parts.


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