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HopeS
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0 posted 2004-06-28 02:57 AM



With Glowing Passion Of We

The night we longingly met
We had sat beside the sea
When you held your guitar
Playing love songs for me

The stars were awakened
Silvery moon shining above
As I knelt there beside you
Basking in the glow of love

The warm water caressed
As we bathed in the lagoon
We entered and entwined
Neath soft light of the moon

The stars brightly glistened
With glowing passion of we
Bodies sensually in unison
Reached peaks of ecstasy

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iliana
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1 posted 2004-06-28 02:59 AM


Now that is a memory that one could never forget!  Beautiful, Hope!   .....jo
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2 posted 2004-06-28 03:00 AM


whew! very sensual!
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3 posted 2004-06-28 12:38 PM


I loved this sensual write Hope, I felt this written with a 70's, '04, perspective which I loved,

"beside" being the key word there...

As I knelt there beside you

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