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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2004-06-27 10:38 PM


It rained enuff today
I watched it kiss the ground
"don't run in the rain; walk."
I know, I know too well.
I know you get more wet.
That would never stop me.
Time is much more precious
than just more or less pain

If it didn't wash off
My layers of makeup
maybe I would walk slow

-Juju-

© Copyright 2004 Juju - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-06-27 11:02 PM


Enjoyed, Juju!
passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2004-06-28 02:51 AM


there comes a point where you don't bother wearing makeup anymore...

myself, I can't wait for then

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-06-28 03:08 PM


Tee Hee, enjoyed this.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

miscellanea
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OH
4 posted 2004-06-28 03:49 PM


enjoyed;  slow walks in rain... nice little thought to ponder...
Juju
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In your dreams
5 posted 2004-06-29 11:51 PM


It had a dubble meaning....................

oh well.

Juju

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