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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-06-27 08:37 PM

Silent Tries

I, ravaged, struck
and burned,
diseased, and forgotten

but still, a memory cannot forget
my face,
my beat,
my life.

I once gave all,
and you, in turn, walked away,
cutting down
all traces
of memory’s wake in tides

and we share a shore no more.

But there is forgiveness, even beyond rocks of resistance,

for I still stand, even
as faith shines through all obstacles,
and forgiveness excels

till the end of time.

If light lines the heart, even
rocks will reveal,

and I will rise, again.

June 27, 2004

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-06-27 08:49 PM

"for I still stand, even
as faith shines through all obstacles,
and forgiveness excels

till the end of time.

If light lines the heart, even
rocks will reveal,

and I will rise, again."

Yes! Thank you for these treasures Karilea.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-06-28 12:51 PM

And your wondrous words have given rise! Mission accomplished!

......jo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-06-28 02:46 AM

definite keeper for me for sure

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2004-06-28 08:08 AM

But there is forgiveness, even beyond rocks of resistance,

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ya know Im loving those lines...
how can a tree hugger resist this one??