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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-06-27 06:30 PM

BloodTimes (Sun Speak)

Let it not be only me
who shall seize her by hand in hold
of a spine of line, ropes gild
one woman, one treasure.

Let it not be only me
who feels the tug of time
though tears of bone have bled ~
old woman, go in peace.

Cave fingers pointing upward,
rising from any grave.

You cannot keep one buried
when bloodlines course, even in
rilings that time carries forth…

even moon shines
on old pathways.

I will not let you trip;
neither will brother Moon.

~*~

Dedicated to my brother
Who walked some time with me,
This day.

June 27, 2004

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-06-27 06:37 PM

Amazing Karilea...the words and the pictures..just perfect!!!
Love the title as well.
Hugs~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Fagin
Member

since 2004-05-07

Posts 126
Ca

2 posted 2004-06-27 06:39 PM

Hanky AAAAAlert! and ty Sis... I saved the pics and think of you..

Bloodlines cant be shattered...
like broken shards of glass..

But they can stick to you..
and be a pain in the

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-06-27 06:40 PM

Again, I see what you are talking about. Lovely poem, and the feeling those formations evoke -- you convey so very well. Thank you so much for sharing such a deep part of you........jo

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2004-06-27 07:05 PM

Very interesting write. The verse and the visuals together really made the piece speak.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2004-06-27 07:52 PM

Loved the pics...and you nailed it perfectly
in describing the scene so very well.

Thanx Sun...

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2004-06-27 10:54 PM

WOW !!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-06-28 12:59 PM

makes me want to go exploring

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2004-06-28 01:26 PM

Your cave fingers really look like fingers pointing! Amazing what your lens captures, not to mention your 3rd eye. Amazing, simply amazing!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2004-06-28 02:00 PM

He will most assuredly be deeply moved by this touching and memorable poem with accompanying keepsake photos!

to each of you!
EA

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

10 posted 2004-06-28 02:26 PM

Thanks for letting us walk with you. This really has to be one of your most moving pieces I've ever read, and with the pictures, it makes me feel even more heady.

and Karilea, I'm loving the new photo, with the sunshine in your hair.

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