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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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  "yet each man kills the thing he loves by each let this be heard, some do it with a bitter look, some with a flattering word" oscar wilde [This message has been edited by Snow (06-27-2004 05:48 AM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Snow, this is absolutely beautiful- sensual; erotic and filled with an emotive power that moves me intensely. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Oh my god! Now how the heck am I suppose to resond to this? To call it genius does not even come close. This is more then just poetry...this is art incarnate. Beauty uncontested. Snow you just made me go ga-ga over these lines. Damn this is the #1 must read poem of the day! I love this dear friend. Love it! Love it! Love it! Yet even those words do not even come close to saying how much I enjoyed this piece. I could pen an entire essay about this poem...and still not even scratch the surface of how great it is, I am so very jealous I did not write this. But I am so overjoyed that I had a chance to read it and thus better my own poetry through understanding the complex nature of your weave. Bravo dear friend. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Snow -- you KNOW i LOVE this one!  ......jo |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
three shadows behind--I loved that description and everything else; rest assured I won't wake you if you write like this! Tremendous write! miscellanea Great title, too! |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
wow.....I went searching and I found. Glad I went looking..... |
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